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The last three lines work beautifully.
And spellcheck got you? "She bearly reacts..." -- ArtRage - now with watercolour! About me and my art Ask me about ArtRage I lurved it, as always. :] It kind of made me think of a person that has given up on everything entirely, or is really tired. My view is probably a bit too cryptic, though.
-- If I get it all down on paper its no longer inside of me threatening the life they belong 2 & i feel like Im naked in front of the crowd Cuz these words r my diary screaming out loud & I know that ull use them however u want 2 ~Breathe (2 AM) Anna Nalick |
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