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:iconflynn-the-cat:
The last three lines work beautifully.
And spellcheck got you? ;P
"She bearly reacts..."

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:iconcyantre:
I wrote most of my poems in Notepad so… thanks for the heads-up.
:iconladybumblebee:
I really liked the way you described her eyes. It's such a graphic line.
:iconalois-noette:
Amazing imagery, especially the electricity

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"The most worthye she is in towne
He that seith other do amiss
And worthy to ber the crowne
Veni, coronaberis"

—Mediaeval Baebes, "Veni Coronaberis" :music:

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At first I thought
"Is this about a person?"
then I thought
"Electricity?",
then I thought
"Nature, maybe?"
then I thought
"Don't even think about it - just enjoy it"
So I did - I really did

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I don't believe in God because when I asked him he said he didn't believe in me.
:icondanetenshijanai:
I lurved it, as always. :] It kind of made me think of a person that has given up on everything entirely, or is really tired. My view is probably a bit too cryptic, though. ^^;;

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If I get it all down on paper its no longer
inside of me threatening the life they belong 2
& i feel like Im naked in front of the crowd
Cuz these words r my diary screaming out loud
& I know that ull use them however u want 2
~Breathe (2 AM) Anna Nalick

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