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View more poetry in my gallery. _ Did you like this piece? If so, please consider buying my book "Shades of Green". It contains this piece, as well as many other poems that I have written. CommentsAh! Wow, this is really nice. Normally I'm not a fan of rhyming verses but you pulled it off in a really impacting and non-cheesy way. Also, great job on the subject matter, the emotion and frustration can not be ignored. Great job!
-- "Here's hoping that the days ahead Won't be as bitter as the ones behind you Be an optimist instead, And somehow happiness will find you. Forget what happened yesterday, I know that better things are on their way." beautiful, the rhymes are perfect, and it flows with an unbreaking beat. great job!
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