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:iconsimplistic-illusion:
This is really good. I love the layout and the wording. Nice job.

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"Once we believe in ourselves we can risk curiosity, wonder, spontaneous delight or any experience that reveals the human spirit."
— e.e. cummings
:iconcyantre:
Thanks, I had written this a few months back in Notepad, but couldn't figure out the spacing until recently. < tt > was the code I needed.
:iconloverz116:
i love how you put it. :]
:iconsimplistic-illusion:
I need to learn those codes and spice up my poetry.

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"Once we believe in ourselves we can risk curiosity, wonder, spontaneous delight or any experience that reveals the human spirit."
— e.e. cummings
:iconubermidget:
Interesting - this time it's in the form of Tetris! The course of relationships is unpredictable like Tetris and can tumble down like the blocks. Before you know it, you, like the blocks, can hit rock bottom. At least, that's how I interpreted the poem! :D

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The only thing that is too short in this world is Life - live it to the max!
:iconninjadp:
...I like that it's a visual piece. The wording is very good, and what I found interesting was the message it conveys. - u-

...Love is quite a puzzle game. :heart:

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If I can figure out how to post my comments I'll let you know!
:iconnightprowlahswmrchik:
Another great poem! Very nice. I can relate to this piece of writing a lot.
:iconmaemaelim:
I love how the words are in the shape of the tetriminos.
Quite nice.

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