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View more poetry in my gallery. _ Did you like this piece? If so, please consider buying my book "Shades of Green". Comments
I really like your description of the businessmen, with the Bluetooth ears. I liked the juxtaposition of the busy people around "you" against the lost, meandering kind of feeling that "you" have.
-- ~Fish ('> ){ "The difference between what we do and what we are capable of doing would suffice to solve most of the world's problems." ~Gandhi i really like this one! it has so much meaning and i can actually imagine myself at a station while reading this! great job! :'D
-- From that day onwards, this back has lost one side's wing. This world without you is nothing but a fantasy. & evreybody gasped.♥ craigggg♥ don't question my authoritah D< i is goin' down to southpark~~ Once again, I am back. Though this time it is not to warn you of art theft or to be kind. This time I am here to tell you that I have proof of your art theft and to let you know that if the stolen images are not taken down the next time you are online, I will report you to the Admins and you WILL have them taken down by force. This is a site for artists to post their own work, not for posers to do it for them. Thank you and good day.
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