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:iconmxskai:
I really like your description of the businessmen, with the Bluetooth ears. I liked the juxtaposition of the busy people around "you" against the lost, meandering kind of feeling that "you" have. :)

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~Fish
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"The difference between what we do and what we are capable of doing would suffice to solve most of the world's problems."
~Gandhi
:iconmekisyo:
i really like this one! it has so much meaning and i can actually imagine myself at a station while reading this! great job! :'D

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From that day onwards, this back has lost one side's wing. This world without you is nothing but a fantasy.

& evreybody gasped.

craigggg♥
don't question my authoritah D<

i is goin' down to southpark~~
:iconlorilae1:
Very well written. I can imagine it well. I always like that.

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If you want your life to be a magnificent story, then begin by realizing that you are the author and everyday you have the opportunity to write a new page. ~ Latesh Joshi
:iconkandy-demon:
lovely and very detail!!!
:iconbakerfield3:
Since I am a specialist for German not English literature I don't feel competent to judge your poems in detail. But anyway I like the rhythm. This one is my favorite. Especially the metaphors of the second verse are very felicitous.
:iconcyantre:
Thanks so much, glad you liked it.
:iconsteamby51:
now THAT is what is called good poem.

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THE LOST ENGINES OF ROANOKE ARE NO LONGER LOST!
ALL EQUIPMENT AND LOCOMOTIVES IN THE SCRAPYARD HAVE BEEN SAVED!!!
:iconcyantre:
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.
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Once again, I am back. Though this time it is not to warn you of art theft or to be kind. This time I am here to tell you that I have proof of your art theft and to let you know that if the stolen images are not taken down the next time you are online, I will report you to the Admins and you WILL have them taken down by force. This is a site for artists to post their own work, not for posers to do it for them. Thank you and good day.

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